The Halloween Shack
By Debbie Day
100 Words
10.1.18
Today,
beyond the woods,
a shack appeared.
“Halloween Goods,” read the sign.
10.5.18
Howling sounds from the shack today.
Gave me shivers!
Should I visit?
10.10.18
Peeked through the window.
Mist spewed from a cauldron.
Almost SURE I saw eyes…
10.18.18
Stepped inside today.
CREEPIEST PLACE EVER.
Skulls, spiderwebs, eerie pictures...
Something whispered, “Welcome,”
and I ran!
10.22.18
Walked past the shack today.
Something watched me from the window.
10.31.18
Trick-or-treated at the shack tonight.
Don’t ask why.
A veiled figure
handed me candy
through the door.
I saw its eyes.
11.1.18
Today,
beyond the woods,
the shack…was gone.
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ReplyDeleteSuch a fun & frightening story! Love the first-person point-of-view.
ReplyDeleteCool story. Love the diary entries! Good luck!
ReplyDeleteLove this 'dated' Halloween tale, so unique! Great job!
ReplyDeleteVery interesting, a shack that appears for a month. Fun story.
ReplyDeleteI think I would avoid the shack. ;) Good luck!
ReplyDeleteoooooh, creepy!
ReplyDeleteA Halloween pop-up store - love it! And what kind of candy does a creepy shack hand out?
ReplyDeleteOoh! Super spooky, Debbie! Love the journal format - very clever way to keep the word count down! Another nice job! :)
ReplyDeleteWow, loved this entry too. The journal format was fun to read. Very spooky, not sure I would be brave enough to take candy from that shack though.
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