This year's rules are as follows: Write a 100 word Halloween story appropriate for children (children here defined as 12 and under) (title not included in the 100 words), using the words potion, cobweb, and trick.
To see all the entries and read the judging criteria, you can go to Susanna's blog right here. Thank you so much for this fun writing opportunity that I've come to look forward to every year!
And now for my entry. Thanks for reading!
GLOONA THE GRINCHY WITCH
By Debbie - 100 words
Gloona the witch was a ghastly old soul-
more greed than a dragon, more warts than a troll.
On Halloween evening, she mixed up a brew
with lizard tail, bedbugs, and pickled worm goo.
From out of her potion, a ghoulish mist crept.
It oozed through the streets until everyone slept.
Beaming with glee, Gloona flew out unseen.
She swept through the city and stole Halloween.
She took every cobweb, each pumpkin and light,
the scarecrows, the sweets, the decor made of fright,
and inside her cottage, she laughed with conceit.
That is, ‘til she heard, “Ring-a-ding. Trick or
treat!”
Love the spin on the Grinch Stole Christmas! Good luck!
ReplyDeleteGreat rhyming! Very clever idea! Good Luck.
ReplyDeleteI love this Debbie. Perfect rhyme as always. And so clever!
ReplyDeleteInspired, fresh mash-up!! Your story scans well, with impeccable meter and rhyme. Fun wordplay. Great images. I think you've got a winner! Good luck!
ReplyDeleteOh, she's a mean one, Ms Gloona. Great rhyming! Good luck! :)
ReplyDeleteFun! Great entry!
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