As you might guess from the title, the story can be up to 50 words, but no more. It should be written for kids 12 and under and can be rhyme, prose, silly, or serious. Here's my entry, hope you enjoy it!
SLUGS AREN’T SLOW
BY DEBBIE DAY
(50 Words)
Frog was smug.
He never lost a race.
Then a slug
said, “I can beat your pace!”
“Slugs are slow.”
“Then race me to the shoal!”
Mark, set, GO!
Then slug began to ROLL.
Zzzzzip! Slug won!
“You see, you never
know.
Slugs can’t run-
that doesn’t mean they’re slow.”
This is fantastic, Debbie.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much David!
DeleteLove the twist. Never underestimate a slug. Living in the Pacific NW, boy do I know that. Those crafty creatures.
ReplyDeleteHaha! Nice. Thanks! :)
DeleteA fun story, Debbie!
ReplyDeleteThanks a bunch!
DeleteI love this; so much fun, great rhyming!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteNice ending rhyme. Surprising and fun. Thank-you.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much! :)
DeleteMy son likes to watch the slugs and snails in the morning. I'll read this to him tonight. Great rhyming story. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteThat is so nice! I hope he enjoys it! :) Thank you! :)
DeleteWOW...Debiie...you nailed it! I love the pace...the word play...the characters...and the last line is perfect! Thank you for playing along!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much and for allowing us all the opportunity!!
DeleteWhat fun! Nice story.
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